So, Project #5 has the beginnings of an actual romantic relationship.
Brrrrrrr... writing that line gave me the shudders.
But even though the sub-plot is there, lurking unnaturally in the distance like a mushroom cloud of doom, I'm not sure how it's going to play out. There's a scene I haven't yet written... one that happens right after Issa is taken away by the monsters, which will drastically change the relationship between the sisters and Komil. I've bounced a few idea off my writing group, but (like usual) I'm just going to keep writing and see how it plays out.
But before I get into this new scene... I want to ask a question.
Do you guys like reading along as I write my first-drafts? Or do you prefer other kinds of posts?
I'm not sure, 'cause often very few people comment when I do post first-draft material (like when the husband and I were in New York for a week). I am posting these scenes 'cause I'm curious about what you think, what you like, what problems you see, where you'd like more (or less) information, etc. I'm grateful anytime someone points out a place/way I can improve.
Anyways, I'd appreciate your thoughts. Maybe you'd just like to read parts of a different story?
Since it's been about a week, the last bite of Project #5 is here.