Sunday, September 11, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday 13

Wo-hoo! 13 is my lucky number, so I guess I better make this one good...

Welcome back all you SSS participants! How's your first Sunday since school is back in session?

I'm in Vancouver today celebrating my birthday a couple days early with my beloved family (including my adorable 4 year old nephew), so I will start the SSS rounds first thing tomorrow morning :)

Last time, Hector started to get a little panicky about 'what the madam said' (and yes, it's that kind of madam).

And now, Simon cuts him off:

“What is it? What does she stare at every day?”
“Simon!”
“Don’t be afraid, Hector.” Simon pushed away from the door and offered his brother a reassuring smile despite the waves of blood pounding through his head and heart. “I’ll think of something.”
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And that's the end of the first scene :)

As always, you can click on the 'Six Sentence Sunday' tab at the top to read from the beginning if you're lost or need a refresher.

...do you guys want me to continue on this story so you can meet the madam? Or would you like to read more of Project #3 with Alexander? Tell me which you want in the comments and I'll start posting whichever story has the most votes.

29 comments:

  1. Great little piece! And have a happy birthday! :)

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  2. Happy birthday! And another great six.

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  3. Great six! I wanna know what Simon's going to come up with. Happy early Birthday

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  4. Gather you are ok after the quake. I'll get back to you as soon as can.

    The boys don't know what she stares at? Don't mind me - all muddle headed

    Happy Birthday!

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  5. Happy B'day! And yes, I want to meet the madam!

    I suspect she's not staring at anything, but rather looking inside. I just wonder if my speculations are correct or way off base. I do have a couple of scenarios how this could play out. Need to know more! :)

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  6. Hope you enjoy the family time! Great six!

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  7. Happy birthday (almost). Hope you are having a great time playing dinosaurs with the nephew.

    I'd vote for Alexander, but only because I know this story.

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  8. Great six! Hope your birthday is a great one!

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  9. Excellent six, can't wait to read more.

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  10. Happy birthday! Great six! I want to meet the madam!

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  11. Project #3 with Alexander, but I like them both.

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  12. Have a fun day :)

    I, of course, want more of Alexander. But I am biased, having read Faith/Simon/Hector already.

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  13. Ooooo. Waves of blood. Very nice description.

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  14. Simon is such a good brother and a good person. I'm rooting for him and would love more of this story. (And happy birthday!)

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  15. I'm with Monica, liking Simon and curious to see where this story goes.

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  16. Hmmm ... I think I want to meet the madam. :)

    Great Six. :) Hope you had a good birthday celebration.

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  17. Great six - and happy birthday week! :)

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  18. HOpe you have a great birthday. Enjoyed your six again this week.

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  19. Great dialogue. Have a great birthday. :)

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  20. I want to meet the madam! Lol. And I guess today is your birthday... so happy birthday, girl! XOXO

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  21. Whoa, happy birthday! Suspenseful six! Definitely curious to see where Simon goes from here and also to meet the madam!

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  22. Wow! Happy Birthday!! Loved how the blood pounded! Can't wait to see what's next!

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  23. ooo! I really enjoy what you've written here, so much so I want to go and check out your previous weeks' postings :D Nice work!

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  24. Happy Birthday. Your descriptions are as fine as cut crystal. Beautiful.

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  25. Really enjoyed these six! I went back and read all the previous ones. I hope you keep up with this one, there's a lot of ways it could go. Great job!

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