The second round of 'Like a Virgin' contest starts today, results on Friday. Since I'm at my parents' house, and didn't bring my laptop, guess I'll be following along via my phone since I'm not heading home until late Saturday :)
If you do decide to pop over out of idle curiosity, just remember that no one but agents are supposed to comment on submissions.
Don't get too excited, I'm not expecting much, other than *actual* feedback due to my 1st POV query :)
I have spent... oh, so many hours fighting to get that query into 3rd POV, but it just doesn't work. Can't use he/she, can't use a name, and as soon as you start throwing around generic terms like, 'the passenger', the focus shifts entirely to Triss/Jackson, so it sounds like Triss is the MC, rather than the gender-ambiguous, nameless MC.
Anyways, I'm expecting the lowest number of *cherries* ;)