As I mentioned on Wednesday, I'm truly interested in your comments on my re-written first chapter of 'Brake Fluid, Blood & Body Bags'.
Everyone, please get your rolled-up newspapers and hit me for anything that tripped you up, big or small.
Anything is helpful, but if you stop reading at some point, out of boredom, confusion, or otherwise, please point that out. How's the voice? Consistent? Believable? Any lines that were so poorly written they gave you a migraine? 'Cause y'know I have problems with this.
If the comment box is too small, or you're hesitant to air your honest thoughts in such a public way, please send me an email. I will truly be grateful.
No matter what you say, I promise not to whine, cry, bite, or revenge-piddle on your kitchen floor :)