...I still need to do a proper grammar-sweep, 'cause I'm sure I've mis-used a few commas and I know the plural of Triss' name is "Triss's" half the time and "Triss'" the other half of the time.
Other than that, it's in a state where I wouldn't be embarrassed to show it to an agent. The relationships/motivations are fleshed out, the transitions have been smoothed, and I have a solid grasp of the MC's "voice" where it just flows naturally off my fingers. Like this observation:
The corner of Jackson’s mouth twitched up. It wasn’t a smile, it was more like a dog showing fang just before it gives a warning growl.