And we all ran like fucking rabbits while Jackson died alone on the linoleum floor.
Chapter 14 starts with:
The beast is stalled dead in the middle of ass-up-nowhere while French lyrics I can’t understand are pouring through the speakers with a maddeningly upbeat tempo.
...what do you think... am I managing to keep the *voice* of this character consistent?
...though I think that last sentence might be missing some punctuation... grammar check, anyone?