tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post7150722969063732474..comments2024-03-08T05:27:56.968-08:00Comments on 1000th.monkey: I use a mac, not a typewriter: Signs of the coming apocalypse1000th.monkeyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16835988128285459745noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post-90790632208344633052012-02-05T21:08:56.860-08:002012-02-05T21:08:56.860-08:00I'd love to see where it goes, too!!
...well,...I'd love to see where it goes, too!!<br /><br />...well, I guess I do know more than you at this point ;)<br /><br />Yup, glad to see you both pointed that out :) ...and I see you also explained the problem properly... the components are good, but something about it doesn't work. When I am less tired (and therefore less prone to making weird mistakes) I will attempt to sort it out.<br /><1000th.monkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16835988128285459745noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post-61633016056778371682012-02-05T21:04:39.323-08:002012-02-05T21:04:39.323-08:00It's one of the curses of being a pantser... y...It's one of the curses of being a pantser... you have to follow where the current takes you ;)<br /><br />But I do swear it's partially due to my brain trying to kill me ;)<br /><br />Ah yes, the line I re-wrote about 3 seconds before posting this... hahahahaha... I see what you mean. I love the idea of it, but this is a perfect example of *dyslexic* mistakes. The words are all correct, 1000th.monkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16835988128285459745noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post-81864993390727701012012-02-01T14:23:53.315-08:002012-02-01T14:23:53.315-08:00I love the world building in this story. And I do ...I love the world building in this story. And I do enjoy reading along with your first drafts, because writing processes are pretty much fascinating. And ahahahhaha romance! I would love to see where this is going to go. :)<br /><br />And about the last line, I agree with Sue. I actually read it the first time as "a bright sky with star trails", and went back and saw that bright was usedYvie Gonyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13449219570545461834noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post-71451972475810336062012-02-01T09:04:41.496-08:002012-02-01T09:04:41.496-08:00I love watching your drafts reshape and form into ...I love watching your drafts reshape and form into a finished product - or a more finished product and I’m sorry you having the beginnings of a romantic relationship lol but if that is what your characters are telling you than that is what you must write. Perhaps it’s a test for yourself, one of those challenges, where instead of saying I cannot do this. You do this. <br />I recently challenged suehttp://sassyspeaks.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com