tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post7149605091244326240..comments2024-03-08T05:27:56.968-08:00Comments on 1000th.monkey: I use a mac, not a typewriter: No Kiss Blogfest1000th.monkeyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16835988128285459745noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post-63677641395398781512012-01-04T17:26:07.131-08:002012-01-04T17:26:07.131-08:00@ portrayaloftichwi
...wow, I had to type that 4 ...@ portrayaloftichwi<br /><br />...wow, I had to type that 4 times... did I spell it right?<br /><br />Yeah, I kinda suck at the whole *romance* thing.<br /><br />...dark obsession? jealously? for some reason that kinda thing is easier for me to write :)1000th.monkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16835988128285459745noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post-58037342033555153042012-01-04T16:59:07.307-08:002012-01-04T16:59:07.307-08:00Thanks everyone for your comments, I've had fu...Thanks everyone for your comments, I've had fun reading through the other entries (think I'm about 6 or 7 from the end...)<br /><br />@ jaybird<br /><br />Thanks! ...now I just need to finish the story ;)<br /><br />@ Amalia T<br /><br />...well, I think he smells pretty classic...<br /><br />@ Tricia J O'Brian<br /><br />Hahahah, dark is what I like to do best :)<br /><br />@ 1000th.monkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16835988128285459745noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post-27522162027919151312012-01-04T16:55:20.285-08:002012-01-04T16:55:20.285-08:00I loved the fact that this wasn't a romantic a...I loved the fact that this wasn't a romantic almost kiss. Great job.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post-80692960442986569652012-01-04T14:26:52.788-08:002012-01-04T14:26:52.788-08:00Your description is flawless. I love the cashier....Your description is flawless. I love the cashier. Love!R.A.Desiletshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08440729149601654745noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post-64727459776848532112012-01-03T22:30:35.372-08:002012-01-03T22:30:35.372-08:00Great job. That cashier is something else.Great job. That cashier is something else.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post-44667841111626586102012-01-03T20:40:38.132-08:002012-01-03T20:40:38.132-08:00A lot of tension in this piece and, yes, some roma...A lot of tension in this piece and, yes, some romance, too.<br /><br />Thanks for sharing it, <a href="http://thatrebelwithablog.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">that rebel, Olivia</a>Olivia J. Herrell, writing as O.J. Barréhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01107021392937169669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post-873550856032676142012-01-03T09:48:10.060-08:002012-01-03T09:48:10.060-08:00ooh, i liked the darkness of this very much. Espec...ooh, i liked the darkness of this very much. Especially the "why would i breathe" line.<br />And to answer your question n my blog, they have been running around for a days, but! She has a spell that keeps her clean and smelling good. There's a bit of contention around it with the MC.<br />Nice job, picking up on it! Keeps me on my toes!Sarah Ahiershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02795455714801965956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post-61744603508073813372012-01-03T09:37:48.171-08:002012-01-03T09:37:48.171-08:00Very nice. I'm interested to read more. Thanks...Very nice. I'm interested to read more. Thanks for sharing.Christine Danekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00979611961825725350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post-72488177364971237552012-01-03T07:33:46.268-08:002012-01-03T07:33:46.268-08:00The more I see of this story the more I like it. I...The more I see of this story the more I like it. It just intrigues me all around.Charity Bradfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01960821077619680661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post-64718246596063038002012-01-02T20:37:27.224-08:002012-01-02T20:37:27.224-08:00She's smarter than she looks and I bet way tou...She's smarter than she looks and I bet way tougher too. :DAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post-12831359974178389762012-01-02T16:13:20.314-08:002012-01-02T16:13:20.314-08:00I really enjoyed reading this! :-) Thanks for part...I really enjoyed reading this! :-) Thanks for participating!Frankie Diane Mallishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06066659801542129040noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post-22483004206196368452012-01-02T16:04:18.761-08:002012-01-02T16:04:18.761-08:00Ha! Love "You're cute when you're slo...Ha! Love "You're cute when you're slow." <br /><br />Nice scene! :)Larissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08874147599272424056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post-8975095669773302892012-01-02T15:46:08.953-08:002012-01-02T15:46:08.953-08:00Hey monkey,nice to meet you.
Most interesting sce...Hey monkey,nice to meet you.<br /><br />Most interesting scene I've read so far. Definitely would like to know more.<br /><br />I'll be back.farawayeyeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17578277501054242356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post-34916283203331225082012-01-02T14:41:26.733-08:002012-01-02T14:41:26.733-08:00Yeah, that was an interesting excerpt that raises ...Yeah, that was an interesting excerpt that raises a lot of questions, including what gender the narrator is, and why the intense scrutiny for cameras at the gas stop on the way to find a fishing lake. ;)<br /><br />Thanks for sharing that with us.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post-77097503965468082252012-01-02T12:18:13.356-08:002012-01-02T12:18:13.356-08:00You pulled me right into this place and made me ca...You pulled me right into this place and made me care about these two and what they're into. And, ha, it is darkly romantic: "why would I breathe?" "my pulse is racing like I'm dodging cops"<br />well, done, thxTricia J. O'Brienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05993110400088806252noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post-29963788750649382982012-01-02T12:07:17.251-08:002012-01-02T12:07:17.251-08:00Ha! That guy behind the counter is a classic. Nice...Ha! That guy behind the counter is a classic. Nicely done.Amalia Dillinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13005039978668326144noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post-902397124160731172012-01-02T10:50:36.364-08:002012-01-02T10:50:36.364-08:00Even if it wasn't romantic, I think this might...Even if it wasn't romantic, I think this might be my fav No Kiss entry. It intriques me. Makes me want to read on.jaybirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10708353376256621965noreply@blogger.com