tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post1670208864098824479..comments2024-03-08T05:27:56.968-08:00Comments on 1000th.monkey: I use a mac, not a typewriter: Music, walkies, and one of those Eureka! moments1000th.monkeyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16835988128285459745noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post-25392363142615210192014-10-06T08:20:49.568-07:002014-10-06T08:20:49.568-07:00...y'know, that could totally work as a (sligh......y'know, that could totally work as a (slightly) off narrator... could you keep pockets of that voice and intersperse it with more linear writing so readers can follow better? Reminds me of Gollum a little :p1000th.monkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16835988128285459745noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post-52173958918633047602014-10-05T11:32:15.838-07:002014-10-05T11:32:15.838-07:00Heh! It is this set of stuff, which is a very, ver...Heh! It is <a href="http://poeticalnessaday.blogspot.ca/2012/10/what-i-am-poking-at.html" rel="nofollow">this</a> set of stuff, which is a very, very odd story that even I have trouble following at times. It IS/was meant to be a sequel to boy and fox, but the tone and setting are vastly different.alcarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929849073911012353noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post-22654474630478334452014-10-05T09:27:09.995-07:002014-10-05T09:27:09.995-07:00Ah, that's kinda how I am with SCARLIGHT too.....Ah, that's kinda how I am with SCARLIGHT too... I've got the first 30,000 words written, and now I know the ending, but how to connect 'C' to 'F'... <br /><br />Okay, you have now completely hooked me again (re-hooked?) with the promise that B&F ends ugly & grim (love the use of the word 'grim' -> so fairytale-ish!).<br /><br />...and unpublishable? when1000th.monkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16835988128285459745noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post-58131357217740518022014-10-04T09:59:33.208-07:002014-10-04T09:59:33.208-07:00*laughs* it is always fun when that happens. I'...*laughs* it is always fun when that happens. I'm still waiting for that with Boy & Fox -- I know how it ends, but the beats to get there aren't formed yet and I suspect a good chunk of the opening won't survive another draft -- the character of Ambrose adds nothing to the story, nor does the plot involving him. <br /><br />I do know it ends ugly and grim and the idea of having to alcarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929849073911012353noreply@blogger.com