tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post2009177321908690076..comments2024-03-08T05:27:56.968-08:00Comments on 1000th.monkey: I use a mac, not a typewriter: FFF 10.21000th.monkeyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16835988128285459745noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post-65333325888156366432013-08-05T12:26:44.842-07:002013-08-05T12:26:44.842-07:00It's a writing theory I first heard of from Wr...It's a writing theory I first heard of from Writing Excuses podcast. Here's my take on it: http://intotheravenousmaw.blogspot.com/2012/06/stained-or-translucent.html.Patrick Stahlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09690555802232025818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post-6809514085724363802013-08-05T11:20:49.551-07:002013-08-05T11:20:49.551-07:00No idea what you mean by 'stained glass'.No idea what you mean by 'stained glass'.1000th.monkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16835988128285459745noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post-67105703243354088752013-08-02T15:35:15.637-07:002013-08-02T15:35:15.637-07:00I felt a little lost without external conflict, bu...I felt a little lost without external conflict, but the writing was good for stained-glass. Even for flash, having some indication of what the narrator is protecting her from would be nice.Patrick Stahlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09690555802232025818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post-17525107010833721952013-08-02T12:44:27.457-07:002013-08-02T12:44:27.457-07:00oh wow on me - I twisted - yeah the first was vamp...oh wow on me - I twisted - yeah the first was vamp then I said to myself - can I write something not vamp or devil... no others find dolls creepy - one of my frineds in the UK has a short -- very very creepy on the subject of dolls<br /><br />ok back to the tidying now suehttp://sassyspeaks.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post-75743829435236142262013-08-02T12:41:22.665-07:002013-08-02T12:41:22.665-07:00hahaha I did so laff at that
yeh Felix - rather th...hahaha I did so laff at that<br />yeh Felix - rather than repeating his name or saying "he" suehttp://sassyspeaks.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post-241493503003965482013-08-02T12:39:51.062-07:002013-08-02T12:39:51.062-07:00yep I knowyep I knowsuehttp://sassyspeaks.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post-34971925094369622212013-08-02T12:28:36.838-07:002013-08-02T12:28:36.838-07:00Hahaha! Nice! Now you fooled me! I was totally thi...Hahaha! Nice! Now you fooled me! I was totally thinking this was going to be another vampire short. Great twist there ;)<br /><br />...and very creepy... well, okay, maybe it's only me who finds dolls really creepy ;)1000th.monkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16835988128285459745noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post-44695439057085024132013-08-02T12:26:48.933-07:002013-08-02T12:26:48.933-07:00Olaf, with a cravat, in the library.
Oh wait, we ...Olaf, with a cravat, in the library.<br /><br />Oh wait, we weren't playing 'Clue'? Sorry, couldn't resist ;)<br /><br />Love the vampire short! Very nice, Sue ;)<br /><br />...though I wasn't 100% sure who 'the shorter one' referred to... Felix?1000th.monkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16835988128285459745noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post-87603344801228405142013-08-02T12:24:34.698-07:002013-08-02T12:24:34.698-07:00Glad you liked it ;) I figured, since everyone is ...Glad you liked it ;) I figured, since everyone is sort of assuming I'm going *dark* in these pieces, I'd switch it up a little, 'cause you know how I love doing that ;p1000th.monkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16835988128285459745noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post-69503575875948083972013-08-02T11:34:45.440-07:002013-08-02T11:34:45.440-07:00#2
It was nearly morning. The three girls knew th...#2<br /><br />It was nearly morning. The three girls knew the night of fun would end at sun’s rise. The curly haired blonde with the face of porcelain and blue dress cried. “Oh I don’t want it to be over.”<br /><br />The dark haired girl in the red dress and white apron scolded. “We will yet have another night to play.”<br /> <br />The red haired girl in the gold evening gown said, “I wish we suehttp://sassyspeaks.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post-66180057273800144132013-08-02T11:32:39.171-07:002013-08-02T11:32:39.171-07:00#1
It was nearly morning. Pink patches scattered ...#1<br /><br />It was nearly morning. Pink patches scattered through the black sky. Olaf settled into the leather sofa with a sigh, and loosened his cravat. “The evening was a success.” <br /><br />Felix sat to the right of him in the green la-z-boy. With eyes half closed, the shorter one agreed. “It was a wise choice to attend the Southhapton ball.”<br /><br />Olaf pulled a starched linen suehttp://sassyspeaks.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3499819998811995494.post-38013894703161297622013-08-02T11:22:01.955-07:002013-08-02T11:22:01.955-07:00Oh F**k now I shouldn’t post mine. That first line...Oh F**k now I shouldn’t post mine. That first line!<br />Ha ha – a twist indeed but not what I thought – good one<br />suehttp://sassyspeaks.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com